Hi maggie,Adelaide here I really admire this work because you have an really outstanding background.To make this even better you could add some real pictures and tell us some famouse new zealand birds.This remids me of A time when I was reserching on birds
Hi Maggie its Hayley Here I think you have done really good on making it look like a work of art. This could be improved by adding a picture of a fantail on the slide by the acrostic poem so people know what a fantail is. this reminds me of when I seen a few fantails By Hayley
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ReplyDeleteI really admire this work because you have an really outstanding background.To make this even better you could add some real pictures and tell us some famouse new zealand birds.This remids me of A time when I was reserching on birds
Hi Maggie its Hayley Here
ReplyDeleteI think you have done really good on making it look like a work of art.
This could be improved by adding a picture of a fantail on the slide by the acrostic poem so people know what a fantail is.
this reminds me of when I seen a few fantails
By Hayley
Hio! I think that this is amazing!maybe you can put in more slides. I remember the time we I had to do something is this! By. and from Bronte
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