Hi Maggie, its Isla I really enjoyed reading your poem and my favourite part was the berry scent. Maybe next time you could make it into an acrostic poem about pangolins. The berries remind me when I first tasted a rasberry with my Dad.
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Hi Maggie, its Isla
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem and my favourite part was the berry scent. Maybe next time you could make it into an acrostic poem about pangolins. The berries remind me when I first tasted a rasberry with my Dad.
Thank you Isla for commenting. If I have time I could make an acrostic poem. When was the first time you tasted a raspberry?
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